Flowchart of Final Idea
Agnes is sat at home flicking through a photo album showing the herself with many small children and also shows a close-up showing the death date of each child and the dates are close together.
She is then shown sat in the park at the same time (3 oclock in the afternoon; when school finishes) with the same notebook writing notes. She is shown also taking a photo of the child whilst sitting in the park.
Subtitles show how the days pass. There are children playing in the park and a mother with 3 small children who two of them are being naughty and she doesn’t notice one of them leaving the park through the gate.
Agnes is then seen leaving the park following the young child. She hurries past the child and opens the car door lifting the child and putting him in closing the door. The child’s face is seen looking out of the window crying.
The small boy is then seen curled up in a darkened room showing a small cup with a droplet of water in it. The small boy is shown with blood coming from his face. Agnes then enters and sits opposite the child staring at him and sits an eats a piece of cake whilst he is watching her eating it. She then stands and leaves the room.
The subtitles show how the days pass and show snippets of him being hit and beaten which shows the progression of the violence.
The first day she walks into the room which she is in silently and closes the door behind her where a yelp is heard coming from the little boy.
The next incident happens later in the day when the boy is huddled in the room against the wall. As the woman enters the room (silently) and gets closer to the boy all we can hear is the scream of the boy. As the woman exits the room she has blood on her hands and the boy has a trickle of blood coming from his nose.
Later on in the evening the woman is holding the journal in her hand against her stomach and is sat wihin the room andf begins to write within the journal. The woman begins to write what has happened throughout the day. Whilst the woman is writing within the journal the room is shown and it is covered in childrens objects such as clothes and other things. There is shouting in the background.
The subtitle shows the final day (on which he dies). The woman begins writing in her journal while watching children playing outside. She sicks the photo in the journal of the small boy and as she leaves the room a loud banging is heard.
Later on within the day the woman is in the kitchen and is preparing the things that she could use to kill him with such as, a variety of different knifes and a cloth to gag him with.
As she enters the room the boy is tried up on the floor and is blindfolded the woman Agnes comes in holding a knife the boy is wining she walks behind him in complete silence and stabs the young boy. The boy falls to the floor and she removes his shoes and leaves the room closing the door. As she leaves the room she rushes to the kitchen where she washes the knife before placing it back into the stand.
The woman is sat inside kictThe final shot shows a variety of shoes lined up along the door and she goes and she places the young boys pair of shoes on the floor next to all of the other pairs of shoes.
Example Textual Analysis
16 years ago
Your flow chart needs a bit more detail. The build up to the kidnap is clear but the woman's actions when she has the boy aren't so clear.
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